After changes made as per suggestion from last post.
I got my partner to watch it and he questioned why Mrs Crawley reacts so much to the wrestling belt because surely she'd already know about it when it's in front of her. He thought Crawley would naturally follow Grandma upwards she stood up.
Now I'm wondering whether to change it to having Mrs Crawley's eyes follow Grandma upward instead, perhaps sparing a glance at the belt. I've posted this playblast and asked the class what they think on facebook. We'll see what they say...
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