Put my animation into linear curves to help me breakdown some areas and make sure no limbs go through other limbs etc. Also testing out the camera cuts with a better video quality!
It seems it's working out better with the camera cuts and my classmates agree. Obviously previously it was a big confusing visually. Though the movements by both characters were small, they were in an equal space so this helps the audience follow the dialogue. In hind sight, it seems unnecessary to have both characters on the screen all the time, so I've left both in the first shot to establish the scene and returned to the both again in the last shot with one character shots in-between.